vidhya iyer

hi there.. it is a good piece of writing. globalization is really a bigger step we have taken. it is a good topic, moreover. but the standard of essay stays ...

hi there.. its a good try. but there are few things that you need to keep in mind while you write. it needs a good rhyme. that is very important. ...

hi there... a wonderful piece of writing.. i like it..! but i would like to give few suggestions.. its a bit strange that a person suddenly walks to the sea ...

hi there.. its a good piece of writing,short and sweet. it's a good emotional flow. is this like a flashback or something..? the grandpa part gives a feeling like its ...

hey Cosmo, this is vidhya. happy to review your work :-) it is a really good piece of writing. nice romantic work. congratulations ! but few things are unclear. first ...

WOW...! its simply superb.. to say exactly, i fell in love with your work.. fantastic.. what a description..! thats love...! and thats how you love writing... :-) really good.. i ...

hi there..! hope you remember me.. :-) its a good work.. i don't get why you have put few questions at the end. i would like point few mistakes in ...

hi there, it is a good piece of writing. it has a good base. i would like to give some suggestion. not necessarily each line start with capital letter. don't ...

hello philip, good to read. i see that you have chosen present tense. that is really challenging because it always disturbs our sentence structure. if properly not explained, it even ...

hello butterfly, i liked reading it..its good. i was stranded with the very first line. for a moment i thought that the girl was looking at all the stores from ...

hey mick, its a nice piece of writing. i liked these especially.. But one day, in the sheriff's deep lair, the bean stirred, for this was not fair! And then ...

hey mick, its a nice piece of writing. i liked these especially.. But one day, in the sheriff's deep lair, the bean stirred, for this was not fair! And then ...

hi there.. i like it... :-) it seems you have a tough fight with the spacing in your poems... same with "love is such a difficult thing" too.. watsup..? am ...

oh it is wonderful! i really liked it. first of all, i liked the name MIRKIMA. the character of the clone and her name stick together. how did you get ...

hi there ! i like it. do you believe in love at first sight? reading the topic, anyone would run this question in their mind first. there is life in ...